The Juvenile Massacres

silverfreak07
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The Juvenile Massacres Feb 12, 2006 13:17:27 GMT 10

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Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 12, 2006 13:17:27 GMT 10

Well, here's another song of mine..it's still a poem..just made it last night..what do you guys think? hehe..

The Juvenile Massacres

Help me, I'm scared
Visions of cruelty and rotten vims
Memories of sabres and little bodies
Keep running through my mind

Numbers float in the pail
The wasted lives of the innocent
Exist in eternity
Not a single soul left alive

My tears can't stop falling
Carnage keeps rising
Agony stays with me
As long as murders outlive

The devil striked again
Driving poisons inside the fresh blood
Hypnotized in vehemence
Those clean hands are depraved

Numbers float in the pail
The wasted lives of the innocent
Exist in eternity
Not a single soul left alive

The poor souls can't be exhumed
Only reciprocated through intergrity

I'm just another body down...Internal bleeding 'round and 'round..

adalita New Member :) Posts: 26	The Juvenile Massacres Feb 12, 2006 17:40:53 GMT 10 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by adalita on Feb 12, 2006 17:40:53 GMT 10 Woah, Heavy stuff. I give it an A+ and a big tick and my super stamp.
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silverfreak07 Full Member Music is my life. Posts: 130	The Juvenile Massacres Feb 12, 2006 18:37:50 GMT 10 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 12, 2006 18:37:50 GMT 10 awesome...thanks!!! I wrote it coz I saw something on the telly..there were bodies of babies inside a pail..i didn't continue to watch it..i could've cried...that's how i wrote the song.. = )
	I'm just another body down...Internal bleeding 'round and 'round..

adalita New Member :) Posts: 26	The Juvenile Massacres Feb 13, 2006 18:34:03 GMT 10 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by adalita on Feb 13, 2006 18:34:03 GMT 10 A+
	insanellamas.cjb.net "You up in the tree, that's good moshing in the tree. We've never seen that before."

silverfreak07 Full Member Music is my life. Posts: 130	The Juvenile Massacres Feb 13, 2006 20:47:30 GMT 10 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 13, 2006 20:47:30 GMT 10 aw, thanks.. A+ for that? haha..quite unbelievable.. check out my other song in the Poetry section..lol..thanks in advance.. = )
	I'm just another body down...Internal bleeding 'round and 'round..

Alayna Moderator Posts: 207	The Juvenile Massacres Feb 17, 2006 6:43:06 GMT 10 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alayna on Feb 17, 2006 6:43:06 GMT 10 lol like I said before, I LOVE IT!

silverfreak07 Full Member Music is my life. Posts: 130	The Juvenile Massacres Feb 19, 2006 5:26:16 GMT 10 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 19, 2006 5:26:16 GMT 10 thanksee!!!! ;D i'm posting another song soon.. i'm sorry, but i won't get tired posting songs of mine in this section..lol.. later!
	I'm just another body down...Internal bleeding 'round and 'round..

Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 12, 2006 13:17:27 GMT 10

Post by adalita on Feb 12, 2006 17:40:53 GMT 10

Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 12, 2006 18:37:50 GMT 10

Post by adalita on Feb 13, 2006 18:34:03 GMT 10

Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 13, 2006 20:47:30 GMT 10

Post by Alayna on Feb 17, 2006 6:43:06 GMT 10

Post by silverfreak07 on Feb 19, 2006 5:26:16 GMT 10