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Chained
May 3, 2006 10:57:49 GMT 10
Post by silverfreak07 on May 3, 2006 10:57:49 GMT 10
Hey, guys! another song I made.. ;D Still working on the tabs..hope you'll like it. [glow=red,2,300]Chained[/glow] [glow=red,2,300] Pull the metals from my hands Drag me everywhere you want Hurt my ribs, hit my head, leave me unfed
Push me to the cage like a beast Leave me in to drown and cease
Chorus All you see is yourself anyway You're the only person in the world The only one breathing and free The only human with a feral mind
Craving for the flimsy morn, I drip my soul in deadly writhe My body's all blood and wound from the chains of forlorn
Lock me again like a beast Kill me like a disease
[Chorus]
Suffocation in this dark cell is slowly swallowing me in Can't describe what I think I believe I'm now daft
[First verse] [/color][/glow] Well? What do you guys think?
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Post by Alayna on May 5, 2006 7:04:35 GMT 10
I like it What inspired this song? [[Issa, you know we all love your writing ]] And guess what? I'm taking a stab at Tagalog. I thought it'd be extremely hard, but I think I' stating to get it. Ummm, I can say 'hello', 'yes', 'no', and 'how are you?' < I think its "kumusta ka?"? Maybe... I can't quite remember, back to studying I guess!
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Chained
May 5, 2006 11:52:50 GMT 10
Post by silverfreak07 on May 5, 2006 11:52:50 GMT 10
thank you, thank you. what inspired me? Umm..idk..I just wrote it one night in the computer..I just felt chained. haha. ;D the song is simply exaggerated, that's all. 'Hello' could simply be "hi", too. Anyone here says 'hi' now as a greeting. ''how are you" is "kumusta ka". glad to know you've been practicing tagalog.
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Chained
May 6, 2006 10:27:42 GMT 10
Post by Alayna on May 6, 2006 10:27:42 GMT 10
Cool, well, I guess 'hi' works all over the world... Yep, my mom is even starting to remember, and she's helping me with pronounciation(sp). Its a good feeling, connecting with my mom, culture... YEP. Anyway, I love you're song. I'll be one of the first to buy your sweet CD...
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Chained
May 13, 2006 16:20:01 GMT 10
Post by silverfreak07 on May 13, 2006 16:20:01 GMT 10
Wow. That's superb. Does she prounounce the words fluently?
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Chained
Aug 11, 2006 4:54:46 GMT 10
Post by oldwaldorf on Aug 11, 2006 4:54:46 GMT 10
hey you wrote quite good!Cool job!
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Chained
Aug 25, 2006 20:51:43 GMT 10
Post by silverfreak07 on Aug 25, 2006 20:51:43 GMT 10
Haha thanks! That's been there like, ages ago!
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Chained
Aug 28, 2006 3:48:00 GMT 10
Post by oldwaldorf on Aug 28, 2006 3:48:00 GMT 10
yeah I know:D
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